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Assignment 1 - 2010-01-24
Good Vis
New York Times article from today, Sunday 2010-01-24, main section, p.15 (front page story), diagram titled "Fatal Radiation: The Case of Scott Jerome-Parks"
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good because
- Clear depiction of device and how it works without requiring words, but if you're interested in detail you merely look at the upper-left corner (natural for english readers) and see How I.M.R.T. works.
- When you're wondering "well, how could this have hurt someone?" your eyes likely wander into the differently coloerd section labeled A FATAL ERROR which shows clear diagrams of the part of the machine that is designed to regulate radiation that was not programmed correctly in the cases mentioned in the article.
- Complicated issues surrounding lengthy article (2.5 full pages) are instantly clarified.
Bad Vis
"Good" Magazine, issue 018, winter 2010, p.24 & 25.
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bad because
- Large spread with small, translucent bar graphs
- Upper-left text purports the point to be that religious affiliation in the US is shifting, and more people are atheist.
- The bar graphs are cleverly designed to be the same color as the clothes of the person they are under, hiding them.
- Each data set is 4 bars, all near the same height.
- The left two are slightly darker shade that the right two, implying they will contrast.
- The detail text indicates that the first pair are intended to be contrasting numbers despite being the same color.
- The second pair are intended to be the same contrast, but in absolute population numbers instead of percentages.
- Population change could have easily been its own graph, reducing the number of graphs to comprehend by almost half.
- When looked at as a whole, the graphs *seem* to be scaled relative to each other, but each individual cluster seems arbitrary.
- "NO RELIGION", the dark-colored chart in the darkly colored upper-right, is hidden despite being the point of the whole page. I think the point is to have the bartender represent this group, but it's not presented visually similarly to the other religious options.
- The original reason I found it bad: a question (religion) unrelated to the magazine (environmentalism, sustainability) with witty presentation that's actually a ham-fisted attempt at humor (a priest and a rabbi and a bartender and...) with discriminatory undertones (die religion die!).
